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72 Public Reviews Given
72 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
*I do know and understand that when we are working sometimes these minor issues will pop up. I will take this into consideration* I am a casual reviewer. I will mention minor grammar mistakes and spelling errors. I try to be fair and to encourage you. I will let you know what I thought of the piece and will take in consideration if it is of a personal nature. I can not wait to see what you have written!
I'm good at...
Giving my honest opinion of what I have read, spotting spelling and minor grammar issues.
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, horror, thriller, mystery just to name a few.
Least Favorite Genres
I am not real fond of sci-fi and poems but I will read them and give me feedback. Also political items I am not fond of either.
I will not review...
I will not review anything that involves rape, incest, animal cruelty abuse.
Public Reviews
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "The Dreamer of Tales" 
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Oh cool, she is now a midwife. Whether*
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "The Forgotten Lover" 
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Interesting is this the hangmans daughter that had her life stolen?
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "Next Body" 
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love how you throw in bits of the story that throw you off a bit then right back into the hangman daughters story.
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "the Broken Bus" 
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
So far I am loving this story.
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "Whispering Soaring" 
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I wonder who just grabbed her.
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hmm, interesting, the story about the hangman's daughter is starting to unfold.
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "Word Of Illusion" 
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very cool, I love the dwarf with the diamond on his forehead.
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "the Delicious Petals" 
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Another great entry. Should be interesting to see what caused the injuries to the students.
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "Seventh Flight" 
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Very interesting introducing the hunters into the mix. Makes you wonder why they are after her.
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "Burning Alien" 
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Awesome entry. I was not expecting her appearance to start to fade so quickly. One thing I use online is Grammarly, it does help when I goof up or don't notice an error.
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "Last Spark" 
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Great entry. The only thing I would change is some of your grammar. I did notice some sentences were not capitalized but other than that great job!
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Review of Hawks With Sins  
for entry "The Crawling Thane" 
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Love it so far, can not wait to read the other chapters.It makes you want to know more about the young woman who left his home.
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I can not imagine how hard that was trying to care for a parent only to learn they have Alzheimers. I lost my mom to COPD and there would be times I would check and make sure she was breathing. I even do that with my husband and kids at times now.
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Review of Mittens  
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am sorry to hear this. It's never easy when we lose our furbabies. I always wonder if Claire is still wandering around the house.
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Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: E | (5.0)
A great view of the life of a wolf pack.
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Review of What War Is  
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Spot on. Why can we not work out our differences and get along? I often wonder this very thought.
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Review of Time  
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love it. I am not in my 40's yet but I can relate to the 20's and 30's. I often find myself thinking about the past. I may see something on t.v that might drum up an old memory.
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Review of Last Flight  
Review by Jessica Rune
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
One of my favorite things, dragons. That was a lovely poem and can not wait to see what else you write in the future.
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