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Review of my baby  
Review by Jas
Rated: E | (1.0)
Its sweet, but not really set out well.

You haven't used many capitals and the verses don't rhyme like couplets.
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Review of FOREVER  
Review by Jas
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

My name is Jas, I am 12 years old. And i'm trying to improve in my writing
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Review by Jas
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi.

You use very good vocabulary, and descriptive words.
although you need to work on your character interaction!
Keep on writing!
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Review by Jas
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello,
I think its really good.
I'm only young, and sometimes I don't understand full concepts, but the parts I do understand in the plot are very good. I nice little story!
I encourage you to be your best and keep on writing!
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