I liked this word search. It was tough for me though, because I do not know much about Volcanoes so I was unfamiliar with the names. Therefore, it took me longer to be able to pick them out of the jumble of letters. But what I do know Volcanoes is so cool! Thank you for choosing interesting subject matter. Maybe another diagonal would be good?
This was a very fun word search! It was a little challenge, but easy enough to feel happy about getting all the words! Every word was spelled correctly, and the subject matter was excellent! Green is Great! Thank you for creating this puzzle, you should make many more!
This is a very soulful poem. I can feel a lot of uneasiness and sorrow pouring out from your words. One of the lines reminds me of a part of my own poem. Where you say: "I will tell no one..." is just like when I say: "[i'll]never tell a soul." it makes me sick that we harbor this. you must continue to write or express yourself in any way you can.
I did notice a couple tiny typos.
cloths = clothes
clams = claims
other than that this work is complete.
I wish you peace.
What a great word search! Normally I am pretty fast at these things but your's was a little bit of a challenge!
It was nice that there were a lot of words to find and that not all of the names were easily spotted commonly used words. Chickens are such wonderful creatures! Thanks for creating an entertaining puzzle.
Now, I'm not a man. But I did find your piece of interest as a writer.
I found this part funny in a family way, I can identify - "It's a family joke that one day she'll come home with an escalator because it's marked “Down”. "
And, I work in retail so I see this a hundred times a day - "pushy women out for their weekly dose of retail therapy." and boy, isn't it nice to touch on things your readers can relate to? I think so.
I have only one tiny suggestion for you. And it is only a suggestion, you can just take it with a grain of salt. When you say "Now shopping is not my scene." you may just want to drop the "Now." It is a little itty bitty bit confusing. But barely! If you leave it the way it is, then I think it is fine.
Dear turtlegreen,
I rarely give a rating of 5 stars. Even if the piece is well thought out, most of the time I don't give such a high rating. I wait for that piece that is not only flawless grammatically, that is not only rich in vocabulary, but also is flushed with emotion. I wait to give 5 stars to the work that has the most feeling. Your poem has stirred up my insides and brought to light dark places in my own life, and you have impressed me. Your word placement and word choice is excellent and I can see no flaws in grammar. I don't claim to be the world's best, but I can pick out a meticulously written poem when I see one.
Keep writing, you have a gift.
Great job! I had a giggle there at the end with "This is best idea anyone has ever had since Who Wants to cook a Microphone..." One thing (this is friendly constructive criticism here) I thought about was the long near-entire paragraphs without any of my input. For a mad lib to be really really side-splitting it might have less space between user words. Keep 'em coming!
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