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Review by Rhodes13
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
ROFL that was a great story.!! i have to admit i was concerned it was going to be some twisted little person fantasy but all in all it was a good solid story that had alot of today's 'real' problems facing couples from different walks of life. I think the paragraphing was good and the tensing was adequate too. How about next story should be flipped...where the leprechaun falls in love with a werewolf.
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