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Review by Rosetta
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is incredibly well written. I love the visiuals your descriptions inspire and how real you've managed to make Henry. This brief glimpse into the world you've created makes me want to read more.
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Review by Rosetta
Rated: E | (3.0)
You have good dialogue in this, I especially liked the baby deer bit. The chapter reads like a screenplay, which is an interesting concept. If that wasn't what you were going for, maybe try adding a bit more detail between the lines of dialogue to break it up a bit and add to the ambiance.
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