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Review by twinny
Rated: E | (5.0)
I total loved it, it remine me of a poem my teacher read to me once in high school," the carpenter's complaint', the life work of the old man went unnotice and is youth was controle by rules and morals. keep writing the truth about life, to say your short story was inspirational. your writing was alive, i could literally see the old man through your words, his struggles, his neighbourhood and his life. thank you for bringing imagery to yours story. it was very good and a must read.
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