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Review by TheShrike
Rated: E | (4.0)
Praise the Lord for the good people in our lives! Nice poem. I don't think I'd change anything. Maybe talk about how you live a life of grateful servitude for the gifts....? But certainly not necessary. Good as is.
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Review of A Penny  
Review by TheShrike
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Theresa,

Your story was well written and it was touching. Spelling/grammar-wise I didn't catch anything. Everything was well worded and concise. These types of stories aren't really my cup of tea, but I think you did a good job. Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Kind Regards,

Rob
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