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Review of Secret moments!  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (3.0)
Very good.


Title:Why this title. I kind of see it in the poem, but maybe expand the title or the poem.

Easy reading:More separation and color.

Thanks,
Sam
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Review of Poetic Canvas  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (3.5)
Add some color for easier and more styling reading.


Thanks,
Sam
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Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this.



Title:Don't know yet.

Dialog:Great.
"You just don't my humor." Is this error intentional?


Easy reading:Good job.


Thanks,
Hatesmondays
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Review of Cowboy Roam  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (4.5)
Title: Maybe instead of 'roam', 'life'?

Easy-reading: Great!

Idea: Where did you get this idea?



Thanks,
Hatesmondays.
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Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Love It.


Title: Perfect.


Dialog: N/A



Easy-reading: Perhaps some auto-annotation with some colors like red and purple.


Idea: Very good idea.


Thanks,
Sam
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Review of Dragon whispers  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (3.5)
I don't like her mom.


Title: Great. Perfect.

Dialog: I think I might be cool if the dragon has one longer quote. That would add even more essence to this.

Easy-Reading: Overall, very good.


Mary's mom walked past the door and turned on the light. Her mom looked at her, and scolded, "Stop delaying your bedtime"

Mary nodded. "Yes, Mommy."

"I thought I heard you say something."



This part reads weird. The "I thought I heard you say something." should not be there. It's confusing.





Hope this review helped!
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Review of Construction  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great job keep writing. Thanks,
Sam
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Review of The Book  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow. I'm very sorry I can't critique this. This is amazing. Thanks,
Your friend,
Sam
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Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very cool! I didn't know that! Thanks,
Sam
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Review of Poetic Canvas  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is great! Love it! Thanks,
Sam
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Review of Penitence  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is really cool! Where did you get the idea? Thanks,
Sam
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Review of Promises  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
LOVE IS REAL!!!!! This is a 5 star.



Thanks,
Your friend, Sam
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Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this. Maybe add Some Color? 5 stars. Thanks,
Your friend, Sam
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Review of Christmas Wreath  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Wow. I'm using this for Christmas. LOVE. By the way, I'm calculating the average age of people who use writing.Com So if you could tell me your age..

Thanks,
Your Friend, Sam
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Review of Alone  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh. This is Great.
Love It. Thanks (Feel free to check out my portfolio),
You friend, Hatesmondays (Sam)
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Review of Spoken With Love  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (4.5)
HAHAAhehehehheh heh. This is Perfect Love It!!
When a door knocks, open.
When a bell rings, answer.
When a heart calls, respond.
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Review of Psycho?  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow. I really scared. So I think to Make it More readable you should double-space the Whole Thing. Thanks (Feel Free to check Out my portfolio),
Hatesmondays (Sam)
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Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (4.5)
LOOOVE IT!!!!!. Thanks,
Hatesmondays (Sam)
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Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (3.5)
Cool! *BigSmile* What Does it Mean?
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Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I really like this. Even More Than "Success"! Your friend, Hatesmondays (Sam)
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Review of F-A-I-L-U-R-E  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
THERE. MY NEW FAVORITE. Thanks (Feel free to check out my portfolio),
Hatesmondays (Sam)
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Review of In The Forest  
Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (4.5)
Really like this Neva. This is awesome. Thanks,
Your Friend, Sam
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Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very very good loved It. Thanks (Feel free to check out my portfolio),
Your friend, Hatesmondays (Sam)
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Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is amazing. WOW. Thanks,
~Your friend, Sam.
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Review by Hatesmondays
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very good work here. I love It. Thanks (Feel free to check out my portfolio),
Hatesmondays, (Your Friend, Sam)
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