I'm a really big poetry fan but great writing. I love how you made the planets seem like they are in an everlasting dance with each other. I love the line "Expanding across space and time, everything has its place" This is a great poem! Thank you so much for sharing this!!
Wow, great writing! I am usually not a very big poetry fan, but yours really caught my attention. I love how you describe the band and all of its parts. You make it sound like one big thing even though its made up of so many little important parts. Great story!
I'm not a big poetry fan but your poem really caught my attention. Your story is so right. No one ever takes the time to block out the cars and cellphones and iPods anymore. I think my favorite line is "I've heard cascading waters from the mountains fall" I could just read that line over and over again. Great poem!
Haha! I love your story! The way Goldy made all those excuses and just kept ranting on and on made the story humorous! I love how you intentionally misspelled the words and that added to the character. I also like how the relatives replied back to his letter. Thank you for sharing!
Wow. Your writing is amazing. That poem is great! I can honestly say I've never read anything like it, but I wish I had. I'm not really a big fan of poetry but I swear I read this at least four times. I love the way they use the flowers to show emotions and feelings towards each other. I really love your writing.
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