I really did like your poem here and can't wait to hear what comes next. Although I think you spelled magick wrong. I believe it should be spelled like this: magic.
I just joined here, and I put a poem up if you want to read it too.
I liked this poem mostly because it put pictures right into my head like a movie.
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