Thank you for sharing. It is refreshing to read a work that comes from a honest place. I relate well and today i dont feel as lonely in this world. Others must think about being true, being who they really are, but not many share, and more are or seem not aware or care. I like your style the words used and the layout, But most important to me is the message. Thanks.
I like the way you go from the ignornance of youth to a more mature realization of reality. i feel powerful energy expressed in the pain and struggle.
i also like the power of faith expressed and how you expressed it, taking charge. The going on alone is deep for me, im taking that on a flesh level
due to "so today i pray". A thought, to emotionally seperate from the ways of this world in order to aquire the goal comes to mind, making sense it being the only way to "see the future ahead of the fight. Looking past the distractions. Thanks for sharing from the heart.
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