Beautiful poem. Short and sweet and explains why it is important for a parent to let their child go out in the world and explore life because if they do not let them go out then they wont learn to do things on their own. I enjoyed it. A very important poem. Especially in today's society.
Beautiful poetry. I love mango as well. One of my favorite fruits. This poem made me happy and hungry as well. From rice, to choco drink, to mango. And great rhymes as well.
Absolutely loved this. If you read my bio you will know that I love writing poems about nature. Nature is something beautiful and like you said it gives more meaning to your life and brings beauty to everyone it surrounds. Thank you for sharing.
I loved reading this. It is beautiful. This really made me think about life and all of my struggles. Although they may be a bit troublesome at times. The alternative (a plain, boring) life would be empty. And emptiness is sadness and depression. Poems like this are my favorite, short and meaningful. With good rhymes. And very deep. Thank you for sharing this, Zeke. Good health to you.
I enjoyed this so much. I too suffer with mental illness. I am a sufferer of crippling OCD and anxiety. Sometimes when im in the middle of a ritual or cant speak right, people are probably windering what is wrong with me. But they do not know me. They don't know or understand the battles that I am going through. They probably just think of me as weird.
Thank you for sharing this. And keep writing. You wrote this beautifully.
Beautiful poem Megan Rose. You have captured everything that is so wonderful about October and Fall. This poem describes everything I am seeing now, as it is that time of the year. Keep writing. You're work is beautiful.
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