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Review by serena
Rated: E | (4.0)
I personally like the flow of the poem but I think the plot has room for improvement. Perhaps you may consider extending the poem to explore deeper emotions that the narrator is feeling ? :D
I see that you're a newbie here and so am I (just joined moments ago in fact). I hope we both get great experiences out of this community. Hope to see you around here !
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