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Review of Puppet  
Review by bandit
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
There were a few grammer issues but I was impressed with your deep thought process. Obviously you put a lot of thought into it. It's a little dark for my taste but still a good piece.
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Review of Poems old and new  
Review by bandit
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice. Your words provoke the reader to think!
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Review by bandit
Rated: E | (3.5)
Not bad but wasn't really feeling it. Even if you only write a few paragraphs, I want to read something in it that will draw me in. Be more descriptive. Keep writing.
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Review of Raining Stars  
Review by bandit
Rated: E | (4.0)
Loved this, very entertaining and reminds me of my sister's writing. Loved the character names and Moondust reminds me of my dog. Nice work.
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