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Review of Mistaken Identity  
Review by Sam
Rated: E | (4.0)
I thought the dialogue was really good. It kept my attention
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This is very good advice. I was taught in my writing class to describe a person's feelings in a story to grab the readers attention, just as you described about the girl was tapping her fingers and yawning, instead of saying she was bored. I am going to use this information while I write my next essay.
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