well prepared poem and I want say,include some details about this poem,I mean under the topic you use introduce this as a poem,I think tz better if you enter some details about this..However poem was great and you try to mention who you are,I think your try is successful...
first of all i want to say that you manage your portfolio very well.you keep poems in one side according to years,and short stories too...It seems like very pleasant and I appreciate the work you did..good work and your short story well prepared and they are lot to think in those 55 words..
"Love is like a wind,we can't see it.,we can't tough it,but we can feel it.."
"Love is divine.."
"Love is the precious flower that bloom in God's garden"
"Love is Love - you must feel it"
whole world depends on Love,what else?..Love always give us a hope to live..
& Love is the only thing that we can't prove,we can love some one but we can't prove them how much we love them..
i like your poem and i love all the lines,but
". in winter I am the first falling snow,in the spring I am the first flower to bloom and in the summer I am a cloud you may never see , do you love me? Because with everything I do I love you ."
hi.
nice work my friend,description below the poem as sad and i have the same feeling..yeah human is the most selfish ones in the world,however you try your best to give the feelings that you felt know? keep it up..
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