*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/sheryl5944
Review Requests: OFF
11 Public Reviews Given
11 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review by SLR
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Can't wait for the next installment!
2
2
Review by SLR
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ok. Found it, lol...

Oh, plot twist...I thought the protagonist was single.

I'm gonna keep going...
3
3
Review of illicit affair  
Review by SLR
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting. Is there more on this site? I want to rate this, but I would like to read a little more.
4
4
Review of Sarah's Secret  
Review by SLR
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I have been trying to figure out the difference between erotica and romance. It seems everyone has a different opinion of where the line is drawn. I'm not gonna lie, this is not my usual kind of reading material, but I've been clicking on story after story in the erotica category to see what constitutes erotica. This was a...weird...read for me. I can't...no, I should say I COULDN'T imagine eating a person alive. The thought never even occurred to me. This was a very descriptive work of fiction, and I'll be honest, I almost didn't comment because I found it so disturbing I thought if I commented I'd find out it was a trap like poor Mark found himself in.

I was horrified. And although I'm not sure what feedback you wanted, I would hope that evoking an emotional response that is likely going to follow me for a long time would be ok with you. This was quite well-written and the story will likely continue making me queasy at random times for the rest of my life.
5
5
Review by SLR
Rated: E | (4.0)
I want more!

I couldn't help but laugh at Kora struggling to be in charge. Haven't we all been frustrated to that point?

I hope you post more because I want to see what else happens :)

I like how the dialogue moves you along through the action. I got to the end and said to myself, "What?!? Where's the rest?"
5 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/sheryl5944