I really liked this twist on the Little Red Riding hood story. Very creative. This story reminds me of the old "Twilight Zone" series. It would have made a great episode. I could picture grandma saying, "So, you want to see something really scary?"
This cracked me up! I love, "I see an empty sheet of word.” It seems like your creativity is alive and well! I think this letter was well worth filling up your word page :) I viewed a few more of your works you are very good. Creativity comes and goes, I think it is a by-product of our lives, but being able to write well takes years to perfect. I will have to really on creativity since “grammatically perfect” escapes me :)
I like the poem, especially the beginning. I think the formatting was messed up during the post, but the point of the poem still came through loud and clear. We all carry baggage built up from when we were young and people disappointed us, shamed us, or left us. This poem would be a good one to show to my teenager recovery group.
I think this song is very good. Would one of the stanzas be the chorus or is it not shown above. I am really interested what style of music you would put to this song. To me it sounds like a blues guitar type song, but I am no musical genius. If there is more to the song, I would really love to read it.
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