From what I have read of this short story, this is very good for a short story. I love animals and dogs and cats both. my favorite animal of all would definitely have to be the cat. I think they can be more lovable than most dogs. anyway, great job on this story.
From what I have read of this story, it is a very well written story. I think you should definitely keep writing those stories. Although I do not usually read stories, except interactive stories. this story is very descriptive. Keep on writing those stories.
I liked this story, I found it very comical. I would not want to have to compete with a brand new car, just kidding. Any way, I would not change any thing about this story. It is a very well written story. You are a very talented writer. Keep on writing.
What a very nice poem. I do not read poetry much, but this is a great poem, I must say. My favorite kind of reading is a interactive story, I like to decide what happens next, but I will occasionally read other types of stories. Any way, keep writing.
I like stories. especially interactive stories, but I like reading short stories as well. Your story is very well written, I have found at least one part humorous. I think that you write stories very well. I think that you should continue posting more stories. Great job
I like to read short stories. your story is a very well written story. I agree, I would not want to take my dog walking at four o'clock in the morning. That would be way to creepy. also I would not want to get up that early. Keep up the good work. I hope to read more of your work
I think that you are a talented writer, although I don't really prefer stories that discuss real illness or decease. Although I prefer interactive stories I will occasionally read a regular story. This story, although I do not like foul language, is not al that bad of a story. keep writing.
I like to read and would love to read more of your work sometime. My favorite kind of story is an interactive story. I love deciding what happens to the character next, deciding his fate, and the fate of those around him. Anyway, keep writing those stories.
Interactive stories are my favorite, I love them. I do not remember watching sonic much, when I was growing up, but from what I have read of your interactive story, I think it sounds very interesting. I think all you guys are doing a great job writing this story. keep it up.
I liked this short story. You write very well. I think it is sad what can happen to people some times. In my opinion, You did a fantastic job with writing this short story. I would love to read more of you stories. my favorite kind of story is an interactive story. I like deciding what happens next.
I think that you are doing a great job with this story. I love reading all kinds of genres. Love stories, all kinds of mysteries, and so on. I think this story is very well written. Your descriptions of various things as you write is very professional. Great job.
I like this little story. I also have a physical disability. My physical disability is Spina Bifida. Although I can see, I know what it is really like to adjust to any kind of physical disability. I Paul is handling his blindness like a trooper. That is something very rare, whether you are born with the disability or acquired it later in life. Great story.
I love reading tickling stories. This Interactive story is, in my opinion, a very great idea for a Interactive Story. I like how you set it up that there can't be any gender for the main character. I think every one that contributed to this story so far has done a super job. Keep It up guys/girls.
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