This is an excellent piece of work. The man as a main character in this story is somewhat off his rocker, and this is evidenced by small details you included in the writing, therefore you have solid attributions to this man's insanity. The way he follows Katherine Dubrand and stalks her as if it was completely normal definately attributed to the story. I really enjoyed the read, keep on writing!
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