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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
Okay, no. This is not a good chapter, at all. For one, the spelling is nearly atrocious and looks like it was done in a hurry. For another, this again plays on the "rushed" scenario as things happening in this chapter take time to happen. However, this is completely short, immediate, and not thought out at all. I suggest deleting it, taking time to think on what you really want to write, and put some thought into it, instead of simply whipping out a half-assed chapter that no one will really want to see until it has some good content.
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