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Review by GrrrlPants
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really enjoyed this. Like everyone else, I was saddened when the final book was released, but the fan fiction community has kept me from going mad. The only issue I had was that you do a bit too much telling and not enough showing. It's like listening to a lecture. You get all the facts you need, but it doesn't draw you in.
I look forward to reading more!
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