I love the innocence of the story, and of the main character. The new man in her life has a bit of mystery and intrigue to him as well. Makes the reader wonder where the story could be going. I also enjoyed the western theme and proper timing of the theme. Looking forward to reading more - hopefully it turns into a series.
Interesting, whimsical, and almost comical birds eye look into the world of one woman who gives more than enough reasons why she doesn't have the time to shower any more. I'm not sure if the piece was meant to be whimsical or almost comical (due to the seriousness of not having enough time in life), but I gathered a chuckle or two relating this one person's story to my own hectic, fast-paced life. The piece got to the point rather quickly, hit all the topics needed to inform the reader of her positions, all in all - an enjoyable read. With any luck, she finds the time in the future to hit the showers or dare I say, I dread being one of her office mates.
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