This piece was a lot of fun. I was wondering the whole time who Santa and Mrs. Claus wer talking to! It figures it was the Easter Bunny. Even though it's now a couple of days after Christmas, this piece still made me smile and put me into the Christmas spirit. Well done. It seems like you had a lot of fun with this piece, and I hope you continue to write more pieces as enjoyable as this one. It was short, but I think that, if it had been longer, it would not have had the same punch that is has now. Nicely done, and keep up the good work!
Merry Christmas!
Write on!
~*Faye M. A.*~
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Even though it's now a couple of days after Christmas, this piece still made me smile and put me into the Christmas spirit. Well done. It seems like you had a lot of fun with this piece, and I hope you continue to write more pieces as enjoyable as this one. It was short, but I think that, if it had been longer, it would not have had the same punch that is has now. Nicely done, and keep up the good work!