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Review of The Nectar Thief  
Review by E. Martin
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very original!

I really like your style of writing.
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Review by E. Martin
Rated: E | (3.0)
I may not be a big fan of Star Trek but I do like your poem and its rimes.

One thing you can tweak is that at the beginning of every stanza, the first letter should be a capital.
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Review by E. Martin
Rated: E | (4.0)
The sense of mystery of your poem is quite compelling. I really like your style of writing.
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Review by E. Martin
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is so cool! I loved reading about Singapore... You do give a clear image of what it's like and what interesting things there are to see.
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Review by E. Martin
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
That certainly gives a different view on Thomas Jefferson. I like it.
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Review by E. Martin
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
It's a bit hard to get into... The language is vulgar; you should omit some of the swearing. The plot is a little weird but a little tweaking could make it work. Grammar needs to be worked on at the beginning of the text.
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Review by E. Martin
Rated: E | (4.0)
Somebody who shares my love of bicycles! :) Really well written!
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