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Review by Snake
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very cool and unusual word usage!! I enjoy a poem that I have to read more than once to garner meaning from. This is definitely not your average "roses are red" drivel.I bet things get pretty crowded up there in your mind...keep up the good work and thanks for sharing this!! :)Snake
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Review by Snake
Rated: E | (3.0)
A cute little love poem...I bet it will mean the world to that special someone.My sense of meter tells me that in some places you have a few too many words...it makes it harder for the poem to FLOW. Of course that is only my opinion. I did enjoy it, thanks for sharing.:)Snake
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Review of Intolerable  
Review by Snake
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
powerful and insightful poem !! Very clear and concise with cool images like "words as blades". The outrage in your "voice" is clear. perhaps a little too close to prose instead of poetry but I appreciate the effort it took to write this down. Thanks for sharing. :)Snake
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Review of My Enemy  
Review by Snake
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Quite a lot of feeling in this one!! I appreciate your emotion. One thing i would like to know (have added to the poem) is exactly what has turned you into what you hate....? A loved one, circumstances, cruel fate, dumb luck??? I think ALL of us are our own worst enemy at times, for various reasons.Thank you for sharing this:)Snake
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