this is a great story; one of my favorites so far. It was such a different kind of story, I didn't know what to expect. Around every paragraph was a connecting brilliant idea. I cannot believe you can come up with something this perfect. An amazing job, keep on writing.
These three Episodes were great! It kept my attention very well and was intriguing. There were a few things that i would have changed, but that's just my opinion. Keep on writing like this and I think you'll create some great works of Literature one day.
This was a great story. I couldn't stop reading throughout it. You are a great writer and I can tell of good quality, too. I'm usually a person that finds grammar or spelling mistakes in everything, but in your "The Sound" there wasn't a one to spot. Plus everything flowed so well, I felt like I was right there destroying the apartment. This was a great story and hilarious at times, great work.
-ScoobyDoobyDawg
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