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I love to read just about anything I get my hands on. I will give you my honest opinion, and I will try and help you with errors. If it is a good read I will tell you all about it.
I'm good at...
I'm good at children's story's. and short stories. and poetry, music, medical, holiday, friendship.
Favorite Genres
animal, children, family, inspirational, drama, nature, poetry, music, friendship.
Least Favorite Genres
mystery, science fiction
Favorite Item Types
poetry, short stories.
Least Favorite Item Types
no novel's I don't have time to read them.. I love them just don't have time.
Public Reviews
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Review of A Lakeside View  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (3.5)
The Title caught my attention, this is a good poem, very well described.
sounds like somewhere you would want to go to just relax and look at all the beauty that
God made. its just amazing that all he had to do is breathe and it appeared.
keep up the good work. this is great.
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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is really great. yes i do agree with you, commit it all to God always. and he will answer. might not be when you want , but he will answer, and then dont forget to be thankful.

this is my favorite saying: When Jesus becomes our focus we will be in the center of Gods will for us.

keep up the good work, I will be looking for more to read.
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Review of Self love  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is amazing. always love yourself no matter what. you did a great job on this poem. please keep writing. and i will keep reading.


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Review of To do list  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is a great poem. i like how you made a list of the things you want to do. I have done this before and it sur helps get you motivated.
keep up the good work.
keep writing.
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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you, Thank you.
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Review of Entwined  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with Group ~ Reviewing with River  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: the title is what caught my attention



Overall Impression: This is a really good poem.



My Favorite part: I love to sleep with your feet entwined with mine

your body pressed into me, as we snuggle

your arms wrapped around me keeping me secure




My final thoughts: This poem reminds me of when me and my boyfriend first met and were together. and still years later we are still doing this very same thing. this was such a great poem. that I had to read it to him. thank you,.











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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with Group ~ Reviewing with River  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks:The title is what captured my attention



Overall Impression: This is a great poem, very well said.



My Favorite part: I have two favorite parts. In God’s great hands our souls do rest His Son’s sacrifice showed it well.



My final thoughts: This is one of the best poem's I have read in along time. it is well written and speaks so much truth.












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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: the title caught my attention.



Overall Impression: this is a great story, I think this is v.2 I like that it can keep my interest.



My Favorite part: With a silent plop the lamp on the night stand broke, but the rabbit saw a light. His previous owner was there for him, in a different shape. Daisy lifted him onto her bed and Birdy sat down on the girl's shoulder.



My final thoughts: this is a great read, its suspenseful and held my attention, I am looking for more to read about this story. keep up the good work.












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Review of Falling in love  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The title caught my attention.



Overall Impression: this made me smile. this is a good poem.



My Favorite part: Just hearing your name
Your thought makes me smile



My final thoughts: I absolutely love this poem. you did such a great job. keep up the good work. and keep writing.. I am going to submit this to good deeds.












"Preferred Author" 
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Review of social illusions  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: this is spot on. very well put.



My Favorite part: The whole poem is my favorite



My final thoughts: what did we ever do with out all this technology, oh I rememeber, we actually had conversations. dinner. and read books. I love technology but believe we should have some self control. keep writing. this was good.












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Review of Daddy  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: the title is what caught my attention



Overall Impression; this is very sad. it is a good poem but sad.



My Favorite part:Dad, I love you, that is forever
Though perfect, I’ll never be ever
So, please except me for who I am
Because of you, I can’t love myself ever again



My final thoughts: this is a touching poem, sad, and its very relatable to me. my ex husband was this way with our three daughters. and still to this day as adults, they have a hard time with relationships. its very sad that men have to be this way.
keep writing. and keep up the good work.












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*Ladybug*
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Review of Thank you, Wind.  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: this is a great story



My Favorite part: Thank you, I need that. . . But, its just, I want to be liked more. I want people to smile when they feel me, and not just when Sun is here. I want to be loved more. To be craved every morning and every night. To be told I am beautiful and amazing when I don't feel like I am. I only want to be loved as much as I love everyone else." I feel the mist from the sprinklers carry to me and I realize how upset Wind is.



My final thoughts: This is a great story. and I believe all teens at some point in there life feel like "Wind". you did a great job. keep up the good work. I am going to submit this to good deeds get cash.












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Review of what happened?  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (2.5)
The title caught my attention;
This is a good poem, all to fimilar of a guy and girl.
you should make sure and use capitals at the first start of your sentences.

over all this is a good poem.

keep writing.
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Review of You’re a douche  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh my. I love this poem. You go girl..
There are so many guys out there, that are just like that.
I could tell you some stories.

This is the best poem i have read in along time.
great job.

Keep writing.


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Review of In the Morning  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Your title caught my attention;

This is a good peom, its a sad poem.
everyone goes through bad things, its what you do with it
that matters.
keep writing.
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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Your title caught my attention.
This is great poem.
i can relate to alot of what you are saying.
continue to write.
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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I found your title be why i wanted to read your story.
i agree kindness goes along way.
when you expect to uch rom people, you only find dissapointment.
and yes kindness doesn't cost a thing.

this is very good.
continue to write
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Review of Dream on Dreamer  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: This is a excellent poem. very touching.



My Favorite part:
Have you ever wondered
Do I really exist
Or am I a figment of one's imagination
A vapor lost in the mist



My final thoughts: This is a great poem, you could almost make it into a song. lol. its very touching. and well written. keep up the good work.












"Preferred Author" 
*Ladybug*
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Review of I miss you  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: the title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: I like this poem, it was easy to follow.



My Favorite part: there were two arts that I like, Even in my dreams
I see you and

When everyday I still miss you


My final thoughts: This is a good poem, and so very true when you are missing the other person. keep up the good work.












"Preferred Author" 
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Review of Why Am I Trying?  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The Title is what caught my attention;



Overall Impression: My impression is that this is a good poem it was easy to read and easy to relate to.



My Favorite part: after all, all this madness is all because of you
how far am I broken? i wonder
then why am I trying?



My final thoughts: This is what every person whose had a bad relationship. Why am I trying. I believe that people try and try over and over, hoping things will change. and when they don't they beat themselves up with the Why.












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Review of text messaging  
Review by Rebecca
Rated: E | (2.5)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: the title is what caught my attention



Overall Impression This is a good read. I think that you could have added a little more to the negetives.



My Favorite part:
The positives: Being in touch with family, and having a great and fast way sending messages.


My final thoughts: I think that when texting you have to be careful how you write those texted, and texting and driving are no good at all.












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Review by Rebecca
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The title is what caught my attention



Overall Impression: This is a good poem, and very true about daughters, us mothers are with them thru everything.



My Favorite part: i'm thinking of you
all the time,



My final thoughts: I have 3 daughters of my own, and I think about them every day , we all text each other thru out the day.












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*Ladybug*
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Review of Only Children  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: This is a great poem, and everything you wrote is so true.




My Favorite part: That reminds us that they are only playing and that's how they learn
That they mean no harm and they love us as much as we love them





My final thoughts: I am with Children everyday, I drive a school bus, and everything you wrote in this poem is so very true. It doesn't matter what children do, you love them unconditionally.












"Preferred Author" 
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Review of Regrets  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: Well the title caught my attention.



Overall Impression: This is a great poem, a very good read.



My Favorite part: “Hello, My name is Regret”
I often pose as your minds biggest threat
Damaging your present, Reflecting your past and Destroying your Future
I am your sadness, i am your madness, I am your fear, I am your disappointment, I am your torture



My final thoughts: This is so true with everyone. we all suffer through Regret, and By the Grace of God we can get through it, and move on.












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Review of you effect me  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: I found this poem, and the title is what caught my attention,


Overall Impression: this is a good poem, right to the point.



My Favorite part: The butterflies in your stomach. I have had that happen a lot.



My final thoughts: those are strong feelings about someone you have. I call it infatuation. you should act on those feels, to find out if it will work.












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