I really liked this piece because it shows how vulnerable one can be when falling in love. I have experienced falling in love and heart break as well and I think that this description is perfect for it. I especially love the lines 13 and 14. I agree that you don't realize how painful it will be and that you sort of because enclosed in a bubble of what has happened.
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