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Review by Kask L.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a beautifully written piece- great imagery. I can smell the forest pines and oaks when I close my eyes, and I can hear that burbling creek! Well done, great read. I am definetly interested in reading some more of your work in the future. One thing I would change is that the flow of the poem is a little choppy, you may want to revise a little wording or formatting here and there-- but other than that this piece was fantastically done! Good work, mate.


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