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Rated: E | (4.5)
A fast easy entertaining read which was only marred by numerous mechanical, spelling and conventional errors. Also, the protagonist's voice seems to be off - a speech editor/typist which speaks using many contractions and folksy manner. I would suggest proof-reading for errors and adjusting the voice used to reflect his language skills which is the point of this whole piece.


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