*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/steph62902
Review Requests: OFF
12 Public Reviews Given
36 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This was very impressive. The only part I would question is where you mention the room getting smaller. It sounds like the subject is resigned to his/her fate instead of feeling closed in and restless. But that's just my point of view. Otherwise, it's really an excellent piece. I liked it very much. Good job!
1 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/steph62902