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Review of Peephole  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Lovely.
I thought the subject was endearing; unity.
It read easily with natural flow. I felt there was a good pattern and use of ending ryme.
Hope this helps?
I think the last line of the first stanza brought together with ending line underlined the meaning.
"I no longer stand alone.that together we are strong."
Light and Inspiration.
Stillwaters.
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Review of We All Remember  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Short, sharp and to the point.
For me, I like the way the beginning reinforces the end.
A vision of death; the ultimate goal.
They tie together in a very clever way.

Good use of ending ryme and pattern.

Keep writing.
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