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Review of Starlight Haze  
Review by Subi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Black,

surprised to see you in newbie- coz ur poem tells you are not new to poems...
such wonderful use of words... a few chosen onesflowing from your heart which express what you want to convey so beautifully...

i was able to feel what you felt while writing them down...

keep writing...
you have a fan!
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Review by Subi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Loved the poem and appreciate your efforts to put a picture there... although your poem may have carried off well even without one...

I lke your style, the pattern... and above all the simplicity in words...
it flows like a stream..

Hot cocoa and hot cidar in chilly nights.... wow i love it!

and then i really felt the pain of the autumn going away...

You have succeeded in conveying what you visualised, so beautifully! keep it up and keep writing more...
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