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Rated: E | (5.0)
Perfect! There are many other words that drive me crazy as well, 'pacific' instead of specific. When I hear someone use the word pacific I usually ask them why is isn't an 'atlantic', one ocean being as good as the other in my opinion.

Somehow I really don't expect the PM to come out with fixin' anytime soon.
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Review of The Forgotten Man  
Rated: E | (3.5)
There was great thought put into this poem.

The flow is a little off, but I have that with some of mine too. Punctuation could use a little work.

Don't be discouraged, you painted a vivid picture of a lonely man with nothing to look forward to.

Well done.
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