GREETINGS FELLOW WORDSMITHS: THERE IS NO ANSWER HERE TO MY QUESTION REGARDING THE LOCATION OF THE WRITING PROMPT. YOU JUST SENT ME MY QUESTION. I DON'T NEED THE QUESTION. I ALREADY KNOW MY QUESTION. I NEED THE ANSWER.
COULD IT BE POSSIBLE, THE SIGHT IS CLUTTERED WITH SO MANY RULES, I COULDN'T SEE THE FOREST FOR THE TREES.
HOW DO I ENTER THE MANDATORY RATING? THE DIRECTIONS SAY TO GIVE 'IT' A RATING OF 1-5. THEREFORE, I DO HERBY GIVE 'IT' A RATING OF 1-5.
I FOUND THE LITTLE STARS MARKED, 'RATE ITEM' SO, I RATED ITEM.
Sad and all too frequent a story. It seems the cliche' about the circumstances of the story being a necessary evil might apply.
I seem to have read somewhere of an alleged quote from Daniel Boon saying he knew it was time to move when he could see the smoke from a neighbor's chimney.
This delightful tale was fun and interesting. However, I'm not really sure what is the moral of the story. I'm thinking it has something to do with the value of friendship. I wonder what adventure might next be encountered with our next encounter? What will be the valuable "E" rated lesson learned in the sequel?
The "E" rating was very reassuring. It offered me the opportunity of knowing I could comfortably read the story. Perhaps even share it with someone special. I would of course give the appropriate recognition to the author and the source that provided the fortuity to experience the exquisite imagination of the author.
When I was a young boy, I wrote an ongoing story of a character I called, "Billy Bug." He was a reflection of myself, my thoughts, my dreams, etc. that I put into story form. I've often wondered what ever happened to my Billy Bug stories. This author's tale brought back fond memories of my childhood writing.
This author's literary effort could easily turn into a continuing adventure with a fan based collection of avid readers. Look out Harry Potter!
The story was easily predictable from the early part of it. I found the plight of the characters to be disgusting and repulsive. It's no Robinson Crusoe island adventure.
The mechanics of the writing seem solid. The writer obviously has an imagination.
This was just not the kind of story I enjoy reading. However, I'm sure there are probably many others who like it just fine.
This commentary provides a remarkable insight into the mentality of mankind from the perspectives of the good and the evil.
The extraordinary, amazing story should serve as a light for the minds of those who have not had the misfortune to experience the disasters of warfare.
Unfortunately, there are far too many true tales of the pain and fear inflicted up humankind by our brethren.
The story also provides a reminder to those of us who have experienced the nightmarish misfortunes of war so that we may never forget those who have sacrificed much for all of us. Thank you. -SS-
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