I love it, esp. because i can relate! Writing can be a soul consuming thing, and leave you feeling like you have nothing else to give sometimes, esp, when the people around you don't understand the burn of the words to be written down!
Wow, this poem really hit home with me! I'm going through a tough time with my parents, esp. my mom, and I really felt your words! They're deep and real and something that can be related to.
Gasp... I love it. It's beautiful! I have a character in a story I am writing that I compare to a rose and she popped into my head when I read this. Powerful words! :) I can't help but ask myself, though, what does your rose love?
I love the emotion! Emotional writing being a very personal thing, it can sometimes be hard to communicate, but i clearly pick up on the desire and heat. But I feel more behind the words, I feel that you find bliss in her, and appreciate her for more than just her body. I love the reverred image you create of her. The only thing I think could be better is the end, it feels off from the poem, but its all still very good. :)
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