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Review by darkmorning
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an amazing start. A lot of great descriptive work, and just the right amount of dialogue. Excellent spelling and grammar, and an amazing grasp of what hooks a reader. The action at the start is gripping, and you want to find out what happens next. Overall, an excellent beginning to what I imagine will be an amazing complete story.
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