*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/tenbroek
Review Requests: OFF
1 Public Reviews Given
4 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review by tenbroek
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This sounded like a great story that I would like to read, but not really enough to pay money for it.

My only questions is why didn't they just destroy the relic if it really could cause the wars to start again? I think a little more clarification on this point would increase my desire to read the story to the point of being willing to pay for it.
1 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/tenbroek