I have spent my day editing and noticed you preface. I really liked all it promised. I had a quick go at editing the words you used. More to give you another perspective than anything else. These are the questions I would be interested on finding out the answers to.
“How will I learn without a teacher? How can I be the girl in the prophecy? Why is this be happening to me?” I demanded loudly as I walked to my village.
Why was I the chosen one? Was there something wrong with me? Who was this enemy who wanted to harm me? Had there been a mistake. How could a six year old girl be the savior of all mankind?
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