Wonderful story, I enjoyed it quite much. You made me laugh at work (hospital), which I sorely needed. I look forward to reading more of your port and your articles on writing.
This story reminded me a little of an Aseop's Fable although I don't know why I was hoping it would end the way it did!
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I was hoping it would end the way it did!