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Review of Colored Glass  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Michael Schultz,

This is a very heart warming short story. I really enjoyed it because I relate to it somewhat, as I also used to spend a lot of time by the sea with my family in my childhood. I don't really have any suggestions to make to it, all I can say is I look forward to reading some more stuff!



Keep Writing!

Tariq
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Review by The Blue Note
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey Becka Altea!

I really like this quirky and interesting poem. Such a simple idea/event turned into a colourful poem, which starts to think, in my interpretation anyway, about the insignificance of life, maybe taking it for granted a little bit. But I loved some the imagery as well. My favourite is the last two lines though:
"I am not blind, just vaguely unaware,
and I spit him forth onto the spattered ground"

Keep Writing!

Tariq
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Review by The Blue Note
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey there!

This is a really sweet and warming poem. It really makes me want to live in the same lighthouse. It reminds me of the times I spent with my parents on the beach when I was younger. The thing I like about it the most is it's completely honest and simple.


Keep Writing!

Tariq
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Review of Me, Myself, and I  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi there!

Nice concise title which gave me an inkling of what to expect...but I didn't expect a poem this nice! I like the way it lays it out for you at the start, then the last parts chop and change like the different moods and personalities of people.

I think everyone can relate to this poem well, because we all are different, and all need to accepted for our different and wonderful variety!

Keep Writing!

Tariq
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