Wow. This has so much emotion. It's breathtaking really. There is so much power behind the words in this piece. The feelings of hopelessness, dejection, abandon, all of this, are portrayed in such a powerful manner. The best kind of poetry in my opinion, is the kind that can evoke the feelings portrayed in the piece into the reader, and you have most certainly done that here. Amazing job.
This can be a very helpful piece for some people. I know I struggle sometimes with commenting on some works because I don't want to put them down. This is great because it will motivate and show people that commenting and writing reviews, even if they are harsh, is helping the artist overall. Great job!
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