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Review of 'A First Kiss'  
Review by scruples
Rated: E | (3.5)
"First Kiss" is a great depiction of a first kiss for:
two teenagers out on a date, two teenagers experimenting with "just kissing", and a journal entry of a young girl in love with someone else. It keeps the reader very hopeful of following up on the next experience. That is great. Good job.
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