Interesting and random, though somewhat predictable. So much killing, haha, I liked it though.
There was so much going on, I feel it can be elaborated on in more than a few areas. This seems like it should be a novel or series. Post-apocalyptic and references the NWO, I would definitely be drawn in. Also, the life reset description at the end was weird and awesome as well as the sociopathic narrator, which is why I was disappointed that it ended so abruptly.
Not too shabby by any means. I love the substance of it, very taboo, though you didn't reveal the boys age, it's obvious he is still in high school. You also used one of my favorite words, amalgamation. How long did it take you to write?
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