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Review by Sweet thistle
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really good minus one or two very small grammatical/placement of words. This story has a lot of potential if you could flesh out more details and give it some background knowledge like a very short prologue that would be amazing maybe even go for a full novel with this one.
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Review by Sweet thistle
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was genuinely beautiful. The descriptions and all the background information made it feel like I was being watched and tested. The only problem I could even think of is the change of perspective and the absence of a quotation mark towards the end.
Overall a 4.5 out of five
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