*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/thunderbert
Review Requests: OFF
2 Public Reviews Given
2 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review by Thunderbert
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This story is cool.
I really liked the way you did the boy meet with Lucario.
But this story is too short, I think you need to put more dialogue.
The dialogue would enhance your story, making it longer and most interesting.
I rated your story in 4/5 because the story is short.
1 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/thunderbert