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Review of Beggar's Sermon  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I want to start by saying that I love this. Wow. The words he said are inspiring. Tips for you: Work on flowing. It was a tiny bit choppy, and the effect might have been better if it was smoother. I hope that helps. It's hard to fix something when it works. (;
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