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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (2.0)
Hi, my name is Tina. I'm part of a reviewing group"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  learning how to enhance my writing skills and also learn to give good reviews in the process. I found your creative story here on Writing.Com on random read and would like to comment on your item.
First off, I would like to thank you for letting me have the oppurtunity to read over your item.
Categories I look for in a story is the narrator, character, place and setting, emotional reaction, plots, and did characters mentioned in story move in the item.

I felt like this was an information piece about investments. The article was about the great idea of saving money for investments because you will have a happy life if you choose this route.
While reading this information I had a hard time understanding the sentences. Suggestion is go back and revise.

Example:Recently when I think about investment the first thing struck my mind is my salary / income. Though investment starts at your first income but the planning and thinking shall start at the very age your mind search for girl / boy. Yes to feel the aroma you need lot of planning and research.

This should be wrote - Recently the first thing that comes to thought, is my wages, income, and overall investment.

Go back and make sure you proof-read to see if it makes sense to the readers.

Other than that I liked how you made investment an optmistic subject to read.
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Review of Accept Me for Me  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. I am doing reviews on all members that is in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your item by names of members found in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" .

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

I love that you make items that many can relate to. I personally like it and feel better after reading this poem. I should know some of this stuff but when it is shared with a reader than that is the art of writing. I also liked that you have many other emotional items in your port. The poetry consistancy and flow was very nice.

Sincerely Tina, part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review of Choice  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. I am doing reviews on all members that is in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your item by names of members found in the group lists.

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

The pattern and flow was there and sounded very nice in your poetry. Only suggestion is to make the text smaller so the poetry you work on would emphasize the work you put in the meaning of the poem. I also liked that you ask a very interesting question in your poetry and thought the style was nice. What would I be? I have to say using this present on going with how I am in character, I would say I'm much more the whale. Again, a very good poem and I liked it very much.


Sincerely Tina, part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. I am doing reviews on all members that is in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your item by names of members found in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" .

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

Thought this poem was beautiful just like your name also. Words I think when thinking of this poem is lonely, beauty, solstice, empty, but yet in a world of beauty. Thought this poem was creative in visionary. It allowed me to vision what was going on with writer mentioning how they felt while writing the poem. Enjoyed reading this.

Sincerely Tina, part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi, L.I.S. . I'm Tina part of the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  and I am reviewing item with members that are in group. You have a poem (I personaly can relate to) I once had a poem called the Taunted Grass and it was very sad and it writing it made no sense to the reader. In the end I deleted the poem even though I wrote it. I was the character and was writing about myself. This poem reminds me of myself and you seem to be incrediable at writing. I believe you are trying to say that the character in the story is a girl who is to lonely to see how special you are as the guy or in your perhaps you want to make it seem so as the writer of the poem.

Suggestion is to go back and make sure there isn't any changes you can do with the words to express how you feel. Check for flow in the poetry. Don't go by what sounds good go by how you feel. Also you and make text changes using the letters green *Smile*. It mentions green in the poem why not?

When she closes her eyes she’s out of reach.

She abandons herself into this green sleep,

Hoping for dreams that are steep,

His kiiss, her dream, she could selfishly keep.

Her world is so calm and still down there in hell,

She thought she could bring him into her spell,

But he’d hurt.....

The above is just example of how you go by how you feel, not saying that is how you can change it.
He would still be the in the storm alighting and ruining their pair,
Like the bitter story of a paper cut.
This is no death, no requiem is needed.
He’s just the imperfection of herself - a stitch,
And this poem is the song of the defeated,
For when she closed her eyes, she was out of reach
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Review of Death Till Dawn  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. I am doing reviews on all members that is in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your item by names of members found in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" .

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

Overall, The poem was sentimental (and has way of helping those who has ever had grief feel better personally.) As far as the poetry flow it was very easy to hear when reading the poem. I enjoyed reading this poetry item. There is allot of description and they were abundent in ryhthm and ryhemes. Who is Jennifer Burton? It may help to explain at the bottom or top of poem a breif description of the person. It would also would contribute to the poem a brief description of Jeniffer. Thank you for sharing your item.


Sincerely Tina, part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review of One Less  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Freethinker20 My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. I am doing reviews on all members that is in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your item by names of members found in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" .

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

First off, I have read already one of your items "Letters" before reading this one. The item "Letters" was wrote really well being a letter. Reading this poem there was consistent poetry flow and the patterns of using them was abundant. You had (writer) ability to use Drip Drop over and make it sound good which work. This was very rare poem but was good poetry. Your writing is unique and keep writing.




Sincerely Tina, part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review of Alzheimer's  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, I'm Tina member of group "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  I'm currently doing reviews for all the members in our group and found your name in the group name list. I enjoyed reading this short poem. I was peeking through your port finding items to review and I picked this out because I wanted something late at night to read associated with forgetfullness hahaha*Laugh* Learning the different styles of poem this one intrigued me. Reason why is because I wanted to know your method of writing this item. I see there you have line three you have three different words counted for three different syllables. Three different syllables is a word broke into different parts as you sound off the word, not three different kind of words, am I not correct? Just curious because I am reading up on poetry and would like your answer for this question.
I really liked your poem because it is associated with Alzheimer's. Not many people (or I know I have not in past) can muster the ability to write creatively a poem about Alzheimers. Overall, thought this was a good poem to mention Alzheimers and thank you for sharing.

Sincerely, Tina

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Review of My mother !  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. I am doing reviews on all members that is in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your item by names of members found in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" .

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

Item "My mother !"  tells me (reader) that you are capable and can convey passion to express it in your writing. The poem was sentiment and the writer shows in the poem the affections into poetry creating). You have the talent as writer to convey the ability to express emotions into poetry. Not all poets have intuitive skill to do so and the ability to jot how they care for love ones. Overall, I enjoyed your peom because it shows your talent as a writer and could be seen in this poem. Enjoyed it much and thanks for sharing.
Sincerely Tina, part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review of The Girl  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi I'm Tina part of the reviewing group "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Read your notebook and seen there was no reply but so glad I stopped by your port before I forgot *Laugh* Anyhow, I am so glad I stopped by this static item. After having a rough day at Writing.Com doing some figuring out how to and what to step up group writing.com ladder sometimes it can be a little hard. Personaly felt that this item lifted up my mood up.
Overall felt this item brought up a good point about boys are different with girls. There is also a saying to that if one misses out they will never find what they where searching all along *Wink*. Thank you for sharing.
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Review of On Poetry  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. Keep in mind that one reviewer opinion may vary from others reviewers opinion of your item. Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your items by names of members found in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" .

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, ryhmes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythem, style, and finnaly the readers take on the poetry.

As my take on your poetry I really enjoyed the simplicity of the meaning of the passage you wrote. It does not matter what a person thinks it should simply be wrote without the worries of commas or periods. You make a valid point and enjoyed this passage about how a poetry should be shared. Thank you for inspiring me to write and as far as the form of your item in poetry it was fantastic.



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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group and found your name of members in group list. Glad we are in the same group and want to take the opportunity to say Thank You for letting me review your item.

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, ryhms, poetry patterns, flow, rythm, style, and finnaly the readers take on the poetry.

You are very sharp about what you say and well presented in the poem. The form of poetry showed is meaning put down precisely and had emotional flow. Very well presented and a great item.

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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, I'm Tina part of the Power Reviewers Group. Overall I thought your poem was so good I wanted to read more of it. Now as far as the poetry aspect I could go on and on and tell which lines are marvelous but like I said it is all good poetry. The meter flow poetry was consistant and you gave visual for reader to see. What an incrediable poem and can't wait to read more of your poems.
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Review of My Inner Bank  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the flow it is very soft as you continue to read further down into the poem. This is a beautiful poetry and would enjoy reading out loud and sharing. What a beautiful conservation to have with the peom is what is unraveled as the reader interpt the poem. Enjoyed it much.
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Review of Night Song  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Yes, part of this group to and do enjoy all the extra reading I get to with it too. It is a step up for me to be joined in two groups and so far I'm glad that I'm learning the niks here. Looking at poetry I'm looking for ryhms, poetry consistancy and flow, rythem and flow. If I was a fairy this how I would picture myself is the immediate thought after reading your poem. You give visionary and the flow is softly revealed as read more into the poem. Thanks for letting me feel like a fairy.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I'm Tina part of the Inked reviewing group. Looking at your item I was impressed with your poetry. The consistancy of poetry was there and the format was extreamly neat. At the bottom of poem was unique and liked looking at your poetry and pretending I was a whale looking at the bottom of your poem. An excellent poem.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I'm Tina part of a reviewing group "Inked". I've seen some of your images here before at Writing.Com. So I was more than glad to read a poem from you. Looking at poetry I look for ryhms and poetry flow and finally the readers impression. I like this so much because it speaks true tunes of happy feelings. The consistancy of a poem is there and this was a very poetic, creative, and sweet poem.
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Review of Our Beginning  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, I'm Tina 29 year old and part of INKED Group. Looking closely at your port I've noticed you are a person who does know quite a bit about poems. There was a couple of item you had listed as a certain type of poetry. I find this unique to have an item listed in port and underneath the subtitle it discuss what kind of poetry it is. This poetry I came across because I was in the mood for something pleasent at the moment to read.
Looking at your item, I'm looking for ryhms and patterns and anything that makes comprehensions.
There is difinately ryhms and quite a bit of flow with the ryhms. Overall it was easy to interpt and enjoyed reading poetry that was positive. Thank you for sharing.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, I am Tina from Inked. You always make your poem interresting as a writer. The dreary truth of this poem is that if you believe in your mother or father and do not develope you own self, you could lead to your on self path of destruction. The poem is easy to interpt and is what I enjoyed the most.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group and found your item on clicking random read part of the Writing.Com community. In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, ryhms, poetry patterns, flow, rythm, style, and finally the readers take on the poetry. First I would like to thank you for the opportunity to review your item.

My overall impression is that this was helping poem for people feeling down cause of the holiday. This does have healing within the words and what I liked and thought was creative in your poem.

Thank you for sharing.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)

Looking at almost any kind of style of poetry I'm searching for ryhems, poetry patterns, flow, rythem, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

Hi, My name is Tina and I found your beautiful poetry and story here at Writing.Com and by using random read. I'm part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  I would like to mention I'm glad I came across your poetry-story and the mood was pleasent for me.

The first thing I did take notice is the poetry form. It has imagery. The poem is visionary and the words are catchy. Overall impression, I like how the writer made proverty seem sophisticated with complexed words playing in poetry. This is a form of art in which I really enjoyed.
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Review of Border Town  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, My name is Tina and I found your beautiful poetry and story here at Writing.Com and by using random read. I'm part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  I would like to mention I'm glad I came across your poetry-story and the mood was pleasent for me.
Looking at almost any kind of style of poetry I'm searching for ryhems, poetry patterns, flow, rythem, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry. In you story I will look at story line, character, narrator, emotional reaction, setting, and describtion.

I like the first paragraph- it was consistant with poetry and ryhemed.
Second paragraph emphasises the first paragraph and thought the lines were catchy in story telling.
Wow really a woman who campares her man as "bit the dust"! That is orginal and is very classy in your story.
Every line was catchy and poetry rythem ranked off the chart. This has poetry and story telling.

My overall impression I LOVE THIS poetry shorty story. It deserves an award!


Thank you for sharing your item in Writing.Com and I enjoyed your piece.
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Review of Before I Go  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the third paragraph thought it felt what many who is truthful to their self moral may feel strong with emotion and felt it was heart-felt to the person you was sending the poem to. There was consistancy with rythem and can read the flow in the poetry.
I liked most of all that it was words that no one has said.
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Review of The Hug  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi, My name is Tina and I found your beautiful poetry here at Writing.Com and by using random read. I'm part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  I would like to mention I'm glad I came across your poetry and the mood was pleasent for me.

I thought this was really cute. There was patterns in rythem and was encouraging. The overall form of poetry was well interpt. Everything looked neat.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
To the writer and author, I am Tina from WDC Saints and found your item by using random read and would like to take the oppurtunity to say Thank You first for letting me review your item.
Secondly you should know that all comments I provide our opinions from me and may very from one reviewer to the other. I will only offer comments on behalf of educating myself, and for learning something, impove for better writing skills, and for better reviewing skills amoung the Writing.Com community.


Review of your item

In the story line you provided:

Characters: The writer is the narrator in the story and does well bringing the main character father, sister, and mother in story.

Narrator: The story telling was good. There was one phrase that cought me off a little in my opinion. (will-he-won’t-he laugh Although there was nothing wrong with you phrased in the sentence and no grammer error just the phrase seems a bit confusing as a (reader).

I do assume you mean that the abusive dad was vendictive in his personality with the violent side and you were expressing that he just had a mean laugh to his mean additude.


Emotional Reaction: As a victim of domestic abuse I couldn't help see the similarities here of Sunday's always being abused.
-The (reader) will easily interpt the passage because of the understanding of the passage.

Conclusion: You told the story as the narrator so good that it was well understood.

To the author: I think you did wonderful explaining how the blood tasted like pennies.

The beggining, plot, and end as well was well wrote in the story and easy for reader to interpt.

Thank you for sharing. *Smile*

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