Very nicely done. Easy to read, but provokes thought.
I espcecially like place called heaven, my heart's desire and folling line.. Rings true to each of our insecurities on earth. Ultimately we all want heaven our final resting place. Good Job. I will look for more of your works.
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I like this. It Made me feel and remember a time I felt lost and desperate. I especially thought the phrase lonely sirens beckon powerful. Tears of Angels weeping poetically sad. my only correction would be the word There's to There is. Keep it singular.
Nice.
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